题目内容
【题目】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
My name is John and I must share with you an event which took place on Flight 1553 out of DCA. My wife and I were traveling to Miami to celebrate an achievement for her and as you can imagine, we were looking forward to fun, sun and laughter.
We boarded the aircraft, without a care in the world. It was cold in Washington and we were ready for Florida. Shortly after taking my seat, I began to feel sick. I knew something wasn't right but just couldn't find out what was happening .Being a doctor and a stubborn man, I resisted efforts by my wife to call for assistance. As the aircraft began its departure roll, I lost consciousness for a short amount of time. As I came around, I quickly realized a few things. Firstly, something very bad had happened to me .Secondly, the aircraft was too heavy with the fuel to go back home. Thirdly, my loss of consciousness had been so deep that I found myself out of control. So not only did I have a medical issue to deal with, but I also had to figure out how to deal with an embarrassing experience.
My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up. I did my best and the flight crew members were so supportive,
checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. It was their sympathy and support that helped me so much. During the flight they kept watching over me and I suddenly had a small group of nurse, bringing blankets, food, drinks and caring and smile. I was thankful to them.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语;
Paragraph 1: Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first.
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Paragraph 2:Hearing that , the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans.
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【答案】Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first. As I was in my seat, I looked up and see the captain standing with a warm smile. “What can I do for you?” the captain asked. I told him I was ok. I was very embarrassed and concerned because of the previous things. He said, “What sizes of pants do you wear?” His voice was full of care. I was puzzled and replied,“34*34.Why do you ask this?”
Paragraph 2:Hearing that, the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans. The man opened his own luggage and gave a complete stranger his pants. I didn’t know what to say. Then I looked at my wife, who smiled and ,without saying a word, let me know it was ok. I made my way to the exit and he said ,“Change on the aircraft. It is fine.”Because of the experience, I was thankful to him for his kindness. I made up my mind to treat others with kindness.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
通过阅读所给文章可知,作者讲述了自己乘坐Flight 1553时发生的故事。作者登机后不久就感到不舒服,甚至还失去意识。幸运的是全机组人员都来支持帮助,给予各方面的关心。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:飞机一着陆,我留在座位上,让别人先走。所以下文应该写在这期间遇到了什么人,发生了什么事。根据第二段开头可知是遇到了机长,机长给作者提供了帮助。第二段开头是:听到这个消息,机长离开了,几分钟后带着他自己的蓝色牛仔裤回来了。本段应该写我看到机长举动后的所思所做,最后作者表达了感激之情,下定决心要善待他人。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。