[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Kate,

A serious problem makes me very worried. So I am writing in hope that you can help me out.

As is known to us all is that mobile phones make it easily for us to communicate. Therefore, in the meantime, they also lead to a great many of problems. I have become a victim of overusing the mobile phone. I am so addicted to it to focus on my studies. Every possible means had been tried to rid itself of its bad effects, but none works. I know it is time I take action to solve the problem. Could you give me some advices?

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1. 在hope之前加the

2. As→What

3. easily→easy

4. Therefore→However

5. 删掉of

6. so→too

7. studies→study

8. had→has

9. take→took

10.advices→advice

【解析】

这是一篇书信应用文。文章主要讲述了作者遇到的问题—沉迷于手机，作者写信给自己的朋友李华，希望得到他的建议和帮助。

1.考查冠词。句意：所以我写信是希望你能帮助我。in the hope that+从句，固定句式，意为“怀着……的希望;希望能……”。故在hope之前加the。

2.考查主语从句。句意：众所周知的是，手机使我们很容易沟通。分析可知，“众所周知的是……”可以表达为what is known to us all is that…或as is known to us all, +主句。其中，as is known to us all是由as引导的非限制性定语从句，如若用在句中，句中缺少主语，句子结构不完整；而what is known to us all引导名词性从句，符合本句结构。故将As 改为What。

3.考查形容词。句意：众所周知的是，手机使我们很容易沟通。分析可知，make it+adj for sb. to do sth，“使某人觉得做某事是……”，应是形容词作宾语补足语。故将easily改为easy。

4.考查副词。句意：然而，与此同时，它们也导致了很多问题。分析可知，前一句提及的优点，本句提及缺点，前后句为转折关系，应用转折副词however。故将Therefore改为However。

5.考查介词。句意：然而，与此同时，它们也导致了很多问题。分析可知，a great many+可数名词复数，意为“很多……”。故将删掉of。

6.考查固定结构。句意：我太沉迷于它而不能专注于我的学习。分析可知，本句应是“too… to …”结构，表达“太……而不能”。故将so改为too。

7.考查名词。句意：我太沉迷于它而不能专注于我的学习。分析可知，study，当作名词意为“学习”来讲时，为不可数名词。故将studies改为study。

8.考查时态和主谓一致。句意：所有可能的方法都试图摆脱它的不良影响，但没有一个奏效。分析可知，文章时态为现在时，因此本句应是现在完成时，主语为every possible means，第三人称单数形式。故将had改为has。

9.考查虚拟语气。句意：我知道该是我采取行动解决问题的时候了。分析可知，本句为虚拟语气句式“it is (hight) time+that+sb did…”，意为“是时候做某事了”。故将take改为took。

10.考查名词。句意：你能给我一些建议吗？advice，意为“建议”，为不可数名词。故将advices改为advice。

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There【1】(be) no team uniform for players in the past. But in the mid-19th century, a New York baseball team actually wore a uniform.

However, times have changed: almost every sport team now has a uniform of its own. The popularity of team uniforms has hit a new high now, and even the fans 【2】(see) wearing team uniforms these days.

Have you ever given 【3】 a thought why team uniforms are so important?

Most of the games require team spirit 【4】(win) a match. When everyone in the group wears the same color, clothes and cap, it can really make you feel like you belong to that group,【5】helps you perform better on the field.

【6】(wear) team uniforms is a good way to separate your teammates from those who you are playing against. You are also able to identify players because the clothes they wear carry their 【7】(name) on the back of their uniforms. It also allows your fans in the stadium to keep track of the game 【8】(easy).When you change into your team's uniform, you get a sense of equality. Every member of the team plays an important role 【9】 the team’s success. You play, win, or lose a match as a 【10】(unite) team, and not as an individual.

【题目】 Imagine you are on a long car trip. It is night and you take a wrong turn onto a dark country road. With a sinking feeling, you realize that you have no idea where you are.

【1】, and the answer is written in light. A shining compass face, with north, south, east and west at the four points, and a big needle are pointing at north. What a relief! You turn your car around and head in the right direction guided by the sky.

For migrating birds, finding their way over long distances through the darkest nights is their second nature. 【2】 — directions written by light and magnetism (磁力). Some birds journey thousands of miles in their twice-yearly journeys. 【3】, like mountain ranges and rivers, to help decide the directions; but birds may also navigate using the stars, and by sensing — or even “seeing” — the Earth’s invisible magnetic field.

For many years, scientists have been studying what’s behind the strong ability of migrating birds to find their way to their winter and summer homes. Here is one thing that they agree on. 【4】. This compass leads them to make their very first autumn flight in the direction that has been long-travelled by the rest of their species. 【5】.

A.Then you glance up at the sky

B.So birds are born knowing which way home is

C.They do it in part by reading directions in the sky

D.Magnetism is important for all animals, especially birds and fishes

E.When they’re on the way, they take the advantage of familiar landmarks

F.Migratory baby birds are already equipped with a kind of present inner compass

G.In birds, migration means two-way journeys — onward journey and backward journey

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A little boy selling magazines for school walked up to a house that people rarely visited. The house was very old and shabby and the owner hardly ever came out. When he did come out, he would not say hello to his neighbors or passers-by but simply just glare at them.

The boy knocked on the door and waited, sweating from fear of the old man. The boy’s parents told him to stay away from the house, and a lot of the other neighborhood children were told the same thing from their parents.

As he was ready to walk away, the door slowly opened. “What do you want?” the old man said impatiently. The little boy was very afraid but he had a quota(份额) to meet for school with selling the magazines. So he got up the courage and said, “Uh, sir, I am selling these magazines and uh, I was wondering if you would like to buy one from me.”

The old man just stared at the boy without a word. The boy could see inside the old man’s house and saw that he had dog figurines(小雕像) on the fireplace mantle. “Do you collect dogs?” The little boy asked. “Yes, I have many collections in my house. They are my family here and they are all I have.” The boy then felt sorry for the man, as it seemed that he was a very lonely soul.

“Well, I do have a magazine here for collectors. It is perfect for you. I also have one about dogs since you like dogs so much.” The old man was ready to close the door on the boy and said, “No, boy. I don’t need any magazines of any kind, now goodbye.”

The little boy was sad that he was not going to make his quota with the sale. He was also sad for the old man being so alone in the house that he owned. The boy went home and then had an idea. He had a little dog figurine that he got some years ago from an aunt. The figurine did not mean nearly as much to him since he had a real live dog and a large family.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The little boy headed back down to the old man’s house.

Paragraph 2:

From that day on something changed inside the old man.

【题目】假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办70周年国庆英文演讲比赛，将邀请英文外教Peter担任评委，请你写封邀请函，内容包括：

1. 活动主题“我爱中国”

2. 活动时间和地点

3. 比赛议程

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件开头和结尾已写好，不包含在字数内。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My name is John and I must share with you an event which took place on Flight 1553 out of DCA. My wife and I were traveling to Miami to celebrate an achievement for her and as you can imagine, we were looking forward to fun, sun and laughter.

We boarded the aircraft, without a care in the world. It was cold in Washington and we were ready for Florida. Shortly after taking my seat, I began to feel sick. I knew something wasn't right but just couldn't find out what was happening .Being a doctor and a stubborn man, I resisted efforts by my wife to call for assistance. As the aircraft began its departure roll, I lost consciousness for a short amount of time. As I came around, I quickly realized a few things. Firstly, something very bad had happened to me .Secondly, the aircraft was too heavy with the fuel to go back home. Thirdly, my loss of consciousness had been so deep that I found myself out of control. So not only did I have a medical issue to deal with, but I also had to figure out how to deal with an embarrassing experience.

My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up. I did my best and the flight crew members were so supportive,

checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. It was their sympathy and support that helped me so much. During the flight they kept watching over me and I suddenly had a small group of nurse, bringing blankets, food, drinks and caring and smile. I was thankful to them.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；

Paragraph 1： Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first.

Paragraph 2：Hearing that , the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans.

【题目】听下面一段较长对话，回答以下小题。

【1】What are the speakers mainly discussing?

A.The food.B.Different customs.C.The health.

【2】How does the host know the guest is full according to the man?

A.The guest eats out all the food.

B.The guest refuses the offered food.

C.The guest leaves some food on the plate.

【3】Where does the woman come from probably?

A.The USA.B.The UK.C.China.

【题目】假定你是李华，今年暑假你校英语角要与英国一所中学一起举办一次主题为“行动吧，少年”（Act，Boys）的夏令营活动，你有意参加。请你给负责人写一封电子邮件申请参加，内容包括：

1. 自我简介；

2. 参加意图；

3. 希望获准。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【题目】阅读下面短文，在空白处填入适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Despite many laws and national parks to protect tigers, their habitats continue to be destroyed and they are still hunted.【1】(sad), tigers are among the most endangered species in the world nowadays. Altogether, there are no more than 5,000 tigers 【2】 (leave) in the wild. Some think that the tiger is already to the point of【3】(die) out in the wild. There are many reasons 【4】 this, like habitat loss and hunting.

Over the years, a number of steps 【5】 (take) to help preserve the tiger population. The Wildlife Conservation Society ( WCS) protects wildlife and habitats. Today WCS is carrying out work in 53 nations across the world, protecting 【6】great variety of species from butterflies to tigers. In 2010, WCS started Tigers Forever, 【7】 aim was to increase the number of tigers in the world by 50 percent in the next 10 years. To achieve their goals,they are working together with governments and other【8】(organize) which are willing to take strong and effective measures to protect tigers and other wild species

Right now the tiger population 【9】(increase) under this program in India and in Far East Russia. Thanks to the hard work of WCS, these large cats have a chance of survival in their 【10】 (nature) environments and not just in zoos years.

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