题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。你校今年11月22日将迎来建校30周年,学校将举行周年庆联欢晚会。请你代表校学生会给你校外教Jane写一封邮件,邀她参加晚会。要点如下:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 告知晚会相关事宜(时间、地点、参加人员等);
3. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:周年联欢晚会Anniversary Gala
Dear Jane,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jane,
It's my pleasure to inform you that the Anniversary Gala will be held in our school. I sincerely invite you to attend it on behalf of the Students' Union.
The gala, which enjoys great popularity among us students, is scheduled to take place in the school hall at 6 pm on November 22. All the teachers and students will be present and a variety of wonderful performances will be put on. With a beautiful voice, you are also expected to give us a performance.
Looking forward to your coming and brilliant performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教Jane写信,邀请她参加学校句型的周年庆联欢晚会。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构:分总
要求:
1. 发出邀请;
2. 告知晚会相关事宜(时间、地点、参加人员等)
3. 表达期望。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite sb. to do sth./ be pleased to do sth./ intend to do sth./ be scheduled on/ put on/ expect sb. to do sth./ look forward to
第三步:连词成句
It's my honor to inform you that the Anniversary Gala will be held in our schoo1 on behalf of the students in our school.
I sincerely invite you to attend it
The gala, which is popular among us students, is scheduled to take place in the school hall, from 6 pm on November 22 to 10:00, lasting 4 hours.
All the teachers and students will be present and a variety of wonderful performances will be put on.
We hope that you can give us a performance, for you have a beautiful voice.
Looking forward to your coming and brilliant performance.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)