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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I live in a distant village in the mountains,which people like raising dogs.I have an adult dog and he was not very big in size.Last week,the relative sent two little dogs to me.They were unable to walk well,even fall to the ground now and then.They moved like two fur balls,funny and lovely.

However,I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them.So I kept the two little one in a box.One day,I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box.Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs!Now the three dogs get along well one another and live happy together.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者生活在一个家家户户都喜欢养狗的村庄，一天作者从亲戚那里得到了两只小狗，作者害怕家里的大狗欺负他们，就把它们放在一个箱子里面，有一天放学，作者看到三只狗狗相处的很愉快的故事。

1.考查连接词。根据后文“ people like raising dogs”，句子结构完整，不缺少成分，再结合前文“I live in a distant village in the mountains”，连接词引导的句子既可以是由in the mountains引导表示地点也可以是由a distant village引导表示所属关系。故填where/whose。

2.考查动词。“I have an adult dog and he was not very big in size”，根据连词and连接两个并列结构，以及have,可知此句运用的是一般现在时，故将was改为is。

3.考查冠词。“the relative sent two little dogs to me”，relative是名词亲戚的意思，此处表示泛指。故将the改为a。

4.考查动词。“even fall to the ground now and then”，由 now and then不时 ，可知fall是一个经常性的动作，因此可以用falling表示经常出现的动作。故将fall改为falling。

5.考查句子结构。“I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them”，分析句子结构，该句是由that引导的宾语从句，因此后面应是一个完整的句子，而if则造成句意不同及句式冗余。故将if删掉。

6.考查代词。“So I kept the two little one in a box”，此处的one指代前面的dog,由the two可知此处应为复数形式。故将one改为ones。

7.考查形容词。“I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box”，该句表示的是作者内心的震惊，而astonishing表示的是事情本身的震惊，astonished表示内心的震惊。故将astonishing改为astonished。

8.考查代词。根据前文“the adult dog lying in the box”，成年狗狗躺在盒子里，因此“Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs”，应该是两个小狗舒服地躺在大狗旁边。故将them改为him。

9.考查动词短语。“the three dogs get along well one another ”，get along well with sb. /sth.与某人（物）相处很好，是固定搭配。故添加with 。

10.考查副词。“live happy together”，分析句子，live是动词，副词修饰动词，故将happy改为happily。