Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录你参加冬奥会吉祥物征集活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：吉祥物 mascot

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, I participated in a Winter Olympic Mascot Design Competition, which turned out to be an extremely rewarding experience.

On Monday morning, our school announced the event, requesting for innovative design proposals for the Beijing 2022 Olympic Mascot. It greatly sparked my interest and I made up my mind to have a try. Therefore, I devoted my spare time after school to my design. Drawing my inspiration from the elements of winter, I decided to take the snowman as the basic figure of the mascot. With details added to refine my design, I carefully painted the final version down, looking forward to showing it to my classmates.

After I unveiled my design enthusiastically to my classmates the next day, I was greeted with a big round of appreciative applause. A sense of achievement surged through me as my classmates all spoke highly of my design. They even encouraged me to submit it to the official account of the Beijing Organising Committee of the Winter Olympic 2022, which boosted my confidence. Then I uploaded my design to the official account after school. I swelled with pride regardless of the result, for I did my bit to be part of the Beijing 2022 Olympic.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求根据图片内容写一篇英文周记。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英文周记；假设你是红星中学学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录你参加冬奥会吉祥物征集活动的全过程。人称应为第一人称，时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据图片，确定关键信息内容：第一幅：“周一上午，我校宣布了本次活动，征集北京2022年奥运会吉祥物的创新设计方案”；第二幅：“从冬天的元素中获得灵感，我决定以雪人作为吉祥物的基本形象。为了完善我的设计，我添加了很多细节，我仔细地把最终的版本画下来，期待着展示给我的同学们。”第三幅：“第二天，当我满怀热情地向同学们展示我的设计时，他们报以热烈的掌声。”第四幅：“放学后我把我的设计上传到官方账号。”

第3步：根据图片关键信息进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。