Question

1．假定你是李华，你校将在暑假举办国际中学生夏令营，主题为"感受中国文化"．请给你的美国朋友Mary写一封电子邮件，邀请她来参加，并说明相关情况（大学教授讲座；游览故宫、长城等名胜古迹；所需费用等）．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mary，
Here's a good opportunity for you to learn about the Chinese culture right in China．In the summer holidays，a camp will be held in my school for international students to experience the Chinese culture．
Lectures will be given by professors from famous universities in China．Students of different cultures can have a face-to-face talk with each other．（高分句型一）Besides，trips to historical places of interest will be made，including the Palace Museum，the Great Wall and so on．（高分句型二）Come and experience the real Chinese culture!You're free to stay in our school，but pay for entrance tickets to places of interest at a discount and your flights fully．（高分句型三）
I'm looking forward to your coming to China．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你校将在暑假举办国际中学生夏令营，主题为"感受中国文化"．请给你的美国朋友Mary写一封电子邮件，邀请她来参加，并说明相关情况．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：大学教授讲座；游览故宫、长城等名胜古迹；所需费用等    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：a face-to-face talk面对面的交谈；Besides另外；places of interest名胜古迹；pay for支付；
Students of different cultures can have a face-to-face talk with each other．（高分句型一）
Besides，trips to historical places of interest will be made，including the Palace Museum，the Great Wall and so on．（高分句型二）
You're free to stay in our school，but pay for entrance tickets to places of interest at a discount and your flights fully．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
       Here's a good opportunity for you to learn about the Chinese culture right in China．In the summer holidays，a camp will be held in my school for international students to experience the Chinese culture．
       Lectures will be given by professors from famous universities in China．Students of different cultures can have a face-to-face talk with each other．（高分句型一）Besides，trips to historical places of interest will be made，including the Palace Museum，the Great Wall and so on．（高分句型二）Come and experience the real Chinese culture!You're free to stay in our school，but pay for entrance tickets to places of interest at a discount and your flights fully．（高分句型三）
       I'm looking forward to your coming to China．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．