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假设你是李华,明年即将进入大学学习,但是不知道怎么样适应大学的生活。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信,寻求建议。
1. 在生活中不会照顾自己;
2. 感到孤独,经常想家;
3. 钱物容易丢失
4. 对食物、气候不适应;
5. 校外租房现象。
注意:
1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 150词左右。
Dear President,
Yours
Li Hua

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Dear President,
I’m a senior 3 student and I’m going to university next year. But I’m worried about the university life and I’m afraid I can’t adjust to the new environment. So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.
It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. They can’t take care of themselves and always feel lonely and homesick. What is more, they may sometimes lose their money, mobile phones and many other things. They even fall ill because of the new climate and food. In addition, some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.
As a pre-university student, I want to maintain a meaningful life in the university. Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析:考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信,寻求关于如何适应大学生活的建议。要点都已经给出,书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.这句话是疑问词+不定式做宾语, It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. 这句话是it做形式主语的句子, some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.这句话用了定语从句, Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?这句话有过去分词做后置定语,还有范文里面还用了 What is more, In addition,这样的关联词,使文章更连贯。
考点:考查书信类写作

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, it’s important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. It’s up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.
Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的图样), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.
The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others don’t like to be scared, so you should not scare (使惊恐) others either.
Following the laws is good citizenship(公民义务). Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games. If a child doesn’t want to follow, it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child. Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need to obey the law when they become adults. 
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点;
2. 不少城市在创建文明城市。请以约120个词谈我们如何成为文明市民。内容包括:
(1) 你认为文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 应具备什么素质,列举两三种文明行为;
(2) 作为中学生,谈谈你应如何从小事做起,为创建文明城市作贡献。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。

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