Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Opinions are divided about if we should buy products promoted by stars．

Some students say that they prefer to buy products promoted by stars because of most of the stars care about the quality of the product they are going to advertise．

Besides, buying those products is a way to support the stars they like．

However, other think what some stars really care is money but not the quality of the product when they make a advertisement．

In addition, the product that a star advertises is not necessary suitable for everyone．

To my opinion, we should be cool and sensible while chosen a product．

The main aspect we are supposed consider is not the advertisement or the star and the quality of the product and its real usefulness in our daily life．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】if改为whether

【2】去掉of

【3】product改为products

【4】other改为others

【5】a改为an

【6】necessary改为necessarily

【7】To改为In

【8】chosen改为choosing

【9】supposed后加to

【10】and改为but

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】介词后的宾语从句不用if引导，如果表示“是否”意义，用whether。

【2】because是连词，后跟句子;'because of是介词，后跟名词或相当于名词的。

【3】泛指“产品”用products。

【4】other改为others。other不能单独用，此处表示“其他人”，用others。

【5】advertisement是以元音音素开头的单词，不定冠词用an。

【6】necessary改为necessarily。修饰形容词suitable用副词。

【7】in one's opinion是固定短语，意为“以某人的观点”。

【8】choose的逻辑主语与句子主语一致，而且二者之间是主动关系，用现在分词作状语。

【9】be supposed to do'‘应该做…，是固定短语。

【10】not．．but．“不是……而是……”，是固定用法。