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2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Manners are important to happy relations among people.No one liked a person with bad manners.Having good manners is seen by many people for a sign of cultural understanding and good taste.Polite words are one of the example.When meet people,saying"Hello!"or"How are you?"and so on means you are very polite,which will make that easy for you to communicate with others.However,other people will hate getting on with you and your life will become difficulty.Only saying polite words can you get on well with others.
All in the all,it is polite words which will make your life become convenient.

分析 礼貌在人际关系中很重要.没有人喜欢不礼貌的人,有礼貌被认为是有文化有品味的标志.见面问候就是一种礼貌,可以让交流更轻松.说话有礼貌会让你和别人相处融洽,生活轻松.

解答 Manners are important to happy relations among people.No one liked a person with bad manners.
                                                                                                likes
Having good manners is seen by many people for a sign of cultural understanding and good taste.
                                                                  as
Polite words are one of the example.When meet people,saying"Hello!"or"How are you?"
                                        examples           meeting
and so on means you are very polite,which will make that easy for you to communicate with others.
                                                                                it
However,other people will hate getting on with you and your life will become difficulty.
Otherwise                                                                                                     difficult
Only∧saying polite words can you get on well with others.
      加by
All in the all,it is polite words which will make your life become convenient.
         去掉                                 that
1.liked改为likes.文章讲述的是一般情况,要用一般现在时态,no one是单数,谓语要用三单形式.
2.for改为as.定语搭配,see sb as把某人看作…
3.example改为examples.题干中有one of结构,后面要接复数名词.
4.meet改为meeting.题干中when引导时间状语从句,省略了you are,后面要用现在分词形式.
5.that改为it.形式宾语结构,真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式.
6.However改为Otherwise.句意表达的是否则,表达结果.
7.difficulty改为difficult.题干中是用来作系动词become的表语,要用形容词.
8.加by.句意表达的是方式方法.
9.the去掉.短语搭配,all in all总而言之.
10.which改为that.强调句型.是对polite words will make your life become convenient中的主语进行强调.

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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