Question

【题目】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

人们常说“字如其人”。据一项调查显示，有85．8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。

注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节。

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.

According to a recent survey, about 85. 8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting. 51. 5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice . 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.

As the saying goes, “writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

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