题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I would always remember what you said. “If you try to, you can be No.1!” I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home but will come to China again sometimes in the future, I will write again and send you photos we take together.
【答案】DearMr.Brown,
I am writing to thank you your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had interest in English. My pronunciation was. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I always remember what you said.“If you try , you can be No.1!”I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home will come to China again in the future, I will write again and send you photos we together.
【解析】第一处:固定搭配thank sb for sth因为某事感谢某人。故with改成for。
第二处:这里的interest表示名词兴趣,所以不能用not,故not改成no。
第三处:这里需要一个形容词来修饰pronunciation,而terribly是副词,所以不行。故terribly改成terrible。
第四处:这里表示一年半的时间,而year是可数名词,所以要用复数。故year改成years。
第五处:这里其实是一个宾语从句,只不过省略了that,所以后面应该跟一个完整的句子,这里缺少谓语动词,又根据句意可知缺少的是be,主语是English故加上is。
第六处:这里用了always,而且后面都开始用一般现在时,所以这里不能用过去时了,故would改成will。
第七处: "if you try to ,you can be No.1” 此句应删去to,因为尝试做什么为try to do sth ,习惯上可以省略 to do sth,故删去to。
第八处:这里前后两部分并没有转折的意思,所以用but不恰当。故可以改成and。
第九处:sometimes表示有时候它后面已经不能再加时间状语了,因为后面有了in the future所以这里应该表示未来的某个时间,故sometimes改成sometime。
第十处:这里其实是一个定语从句,它修饰的是前面的photo,因为那张照片是我们过去照的,所以用过去时,故take改成took。