题目内容
【题目】用英语写一篇100词左右的文章介绍我国首位航天员杨利伟。
姓名：杨利伟
出生年月：1965年6月
籍贯：辽宁省绥中县
简历：1983年6月参军
1992年调到成都空军某部
1996年8月1500名飞行员参加体检，杨利伟进入14人之列
1998年1月正式成为我国首批航天员，经过5年训练光荣地选为我国首次载人航天飞行首飞队成员
2003年10月15日乘“神州5号”飞船遨游太空
出生于农民家庭，从儿时起向往蓝天，在部队聪明好学，训练刻苦。
参考词汇：astronaut 宇航员 manned-space aircraft 载人航天飞机 research 研究 candidate 候选人
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【答案】The Pride of China
Yang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.
When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky. He joined the army in June, 1983. Nine years later he went to work in air force in Chengdu. In August 1996 he was chosen to be one of the 14 astronaut candidates from 1500 pilots through the physical examination.
He was a wise soldier and worked hard in the army. He became the first astronaut of our country in 1998 and was chosen to be one of the first manned space aircraft astronauts. On October 15, 2003 he successfully flew to space and carried out some research work.
He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people. We should learn from him.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生一篇100词左右的文章介绍我国首位航天员杨利伟。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明写作的对象。
2. 具体内容：
1）姓名：杨利伟
2）出生年月：1965年6月
3）籍贯：辽宁省绥中县
4）简历：1983年6月参军
5）1992年调到成都空军某部
6）1996年8月1500名飞行员参加体检，杨利伟进入14人之列
7）1998年1月正式成为我国首批航天员，经过5年训练光荣地选为我国首次载人航天飞行首飞队成员
8）2003年10月15日乘“神州5号”飞船遨游太空
9）出生于农民家庭，从儿时起向往蓝天，在部队聪明好学，训练刻苦。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
dream of ；one of；carry out；the honor of；learn from
第三步：连词成句
1. Yang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.
2. When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky.
3. He joined the army in June, 1983.
4. Nine years later he went to work in air force in Chengdu.
5. In August 1996 he was chosen to be one of the 14 astronaut candidates from 1500 pilots through the physical examination.
6. He was a wise soldier and worked hard in the army.
7. He became the first astronaut of our country in 1998 and was chosen to be one of the first manned space aircraft astronauts.
8. On October 15, 2003 he successfully flew to space and carried out some research work.
9. He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people.
10. We should learn from him.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【题目】针对最近报道的“扶起摔倒的老人而官司缠身”，“救人反而惹来麻烦”等事件，你们班开展了一次主题班会：老人摔倒，你会伸手去扶吗？请结合讨论情况写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。
赞成帮助 | 帮助他人是我们的职责，是中华民族的良好传统等 |
反对帮助 | 现在有些人丧失良知，帮助他们会惹来麻烦，官司缠身等 |
你的看法 | …… |
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we should lend a helping hand when an old man has a fall. The opinions vary from person to person.
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