题目内容
【题目】针对最近报道的“扶起摔倒的老人而官司缠身”,“救人反而惹来麻烦”等事件,你们班开展了一次主题班会:老人摔倒,你会伸手去扶吗?请结合讨论情况写一篇短文,并发表自己的看法。
赞成帮助 | 帮助他人是我们的职责,是中华民族的良好传统等 |
反对帮助 | 现在有些人丧失良知,帮助他们会惹来麻烦,官司缠身等 |
你的看法 | …… |
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we should lend a helping hand when an old man has a fall. The opinions vary from person to person.
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【答案】Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we should lend a helping hand when an old man has a fall. The opinions vary from person to person.
Some students take the attitude that it’s our responsibility to help them. For one thing, we Chinese have fine traditions to help those in trouble. For another, they firmly believe that the world will become a better place if everyone does a little for others.
Others, however, think differently. Because in recent years some helpers are accused of doing so and have to pay the old lots of money.They think it’s necessary to keep a distance from them; otherwise, they would get into trouble.
As far as I’m concerned, whether to help the old depends on the situation. If the old are in great danger, helping send them to the nearest hospital is very necessary. The world needs warmhearted people.
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求为班会主题写一篇文章。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇班会主题文章:针对最近报道的“扶起摔倒的老人而官司缠身”,“救人反而惹来麻烦”等事件,你们班开展了一次主题班会:老人摔倒,你会伸手去扶吗?请结合讨论情况写一篇短文,并发表自己的看法。赞成帮助:帮助他人是我们的职责,是中华民族的良好传统等;反对帮助:现在有些人丧失良知,帮助他们会惹来麻烦,官司缠身等;你的看法 ……。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:help those in trouble.(帮助那些处于困境的人);keep a distance from them(避开他们);get into trouble(陷入困境)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。