Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out. Then we went back to school and played the football. After this, while we were about to go home , we saw our English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate. He told us we have made great progress in English this term . He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would follow his advices.

 

Answer 1

1.usually---usual

2.do→did

3.classmate ---classmates

4.And ---But

5..had∧ been

6.the 去掉

7..while改when

8.have---had

9.wrote---write

10.advices—advice

【解析】

试题分析：今天是周日，我做完作业后，约同学去看电影。然而当我们到电影院的时候电影票已经卖完了，于是我们去学校踢足球。这时我们碰到了英语老师，老师说我们英语取得了很大的进步，而且鼓励我们要更加努力地学习。

1.小题1】usually---usual考查形容词。I didn't get up early as usually.固定短语：as usual“像往常一样”，把usually改为usual。

2.do→did 考查动词过去式。I do some washing.根据上文可知文章是讲述过去的事情，故把do改为did。

3.classmate ---classmates 考查名词复数。One of 后面跟复数名词，把classmate改为classmates。

4.And ---But 考查连词。And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3:00 p.m. 根据上下文内容可知此处是转折关系，把And改为But。

5..had后加 been 考查谓语动词。we found all the tickets had sold out. 由句意判断ticket和销售是被动关系，应该用过去完成时的被动形式，故在had后加been。

6.the 去掉 考查冠词。Then we went back to school and played the football. 固定短语：play football“踢足球”，在球类前面没有冠词，故去掉the。

7..while改when 考查连词。After this, while we were about to go home , while后面句子的谓语动词应该是延续性动词，故把while改为when。

8.have---had 考查谓语动词时态。He told us we have made great progress in English。主句是过去时，后面的宾语从句应该用过去时的适当形式，所以把have改为had。

9.wrote---write 考查谓语动词形式。. He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. 情态动词should后面应该跟动词原形，把wrote改为write。

10.advices—advice 考查名词。We promised him that we would follow his advices. Advice是不可数名词，故把advices改为advice。

考点：考查短文改错。