题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你寒假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1) 未及时回信的原因;
2) 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等);
3) 希望有时间来中国玩。
注意:
1)字数:120左右;
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
……
Yours truly,
【答案】Dear Jack,
To begin with, please accept my sincere apology for not replying to your last letter in time. During those days, I'd been busy preparing for the final exam which was very important to me.
Now the winter vacation is approaching, during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip to some places of interest together with a few of my good friends, aiming to broaden our horizons. Additionally, being a volunteer is another thing I want to do, from which I can benefit a lot. At last, I'd like to do a part-time job, with the purpose of knowing more about society and, at the same time, I can earn some money, which can be called killing two birds with one stone.
What do you think of my plan? Hope you could come to China in your spare time and have a wonderful time with us.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达,是一篇提纲类作文,难度不大。根据材料内容可知本文要使用第一人称,因为时间跨度较长,所以时态较为复杂。写作的话题为假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你寒假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件,在写作时应注意符合题意,根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤:
一、阅读提示,弄清所有信息,明确写作要点。
1. 未及时回信的原因:忙于准备期末考试;
2.假期打算:做兼职,旅行,做志愿者;
3.希望对方有时间来中国旅游;
二、根据要点,写出关键词、短语或句子。 To begin with, please accept my sincere apology for...,be busy preparing for...,approach,places of interest ,additionally,with the purpose of,
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用多种时态。Hope you could come to China in your spare time and have a wonderful time with us,还反复使用定语从句which was very important to me. ....以及during which time I want to do many things, one of which is making a trip