题目内容
【题目】书面表达
2016年除夕之际,全国多地禁止燃放烟花爆竹。虽然有明文规定,但除夕之夜爆竹烟花燃放依旧如故。对于该不该禁止燃放烟花爆竹,民众主要存在两种看法。请以"Fireworks–to be forbidden or not"为题,结合表格内容用英语写一篇100—120个词的英语短文。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)
观点一:支持 | 1. 污染空气 | 2. 引发火灾 |
观点一:反对 | 1. 庆祝新年的传统习俗 | 3. 不是环境恶化的主要因素 |
你的观点 | 园艺工(gardener) | 陈述1–2个原因 |
注意:短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。
Fireworks–to be forbidden or not
When the Spring Festival of 2016 was around the corner, bans on fireworks frequently came out. Some citizens think ________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Fireworks-to be forbidden or not
When the Spring Festival of 2016 was around the corner, bans on fireworks frequently came out. Some citizens think it necessary to forbid setting off fireworks. For one thing, fireworks worsen air pollution and give rise to smog. For another, they often bring about fires, and even cause great loss of property in addition to severe injuries and deaths.
However, those who are opposed to banning fireworks think it the Chinese tradition to set off fireworks. It is a way of adding to atmosphere of happiness. Besides, fireworks are not set off every day, so it is absolutely not the major source of environmental problem.
Personally speaking, I think it a good idea to ban fireworks for the sake of safety. Anyway, we have many other ways of celebrating the New Year such as having parties. Above all, forbidding fireworks may well let citizens have a peaceful New Year’s Eve.
【解析】
文章结构清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅。文章使用了较高级的词汇,如be opposed to, add to, atmosphere, absolutely, for the sake of等;变换使用词汇和句式,如give rise to/bring about/cause,避免乏味;恰当地使用了衔接词,如For one thing…For another, However, Besides, Anyway等,使上下文紧凑、过度自然;结尾句起到了总结和升华主题的作用。