Question

【题目】假设你是李华，5月1日你和同学参观了北京大学。请根据下图，用英语写一篇日记。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

It's a fine day today and

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Answer 1

【答案】May 1 Monday Fine

It's a fine day today and we paid a visit to Beijing University. Early in the morning, we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome. We were then shown around.

We first went to the library with a large collection of books, where we saw students reading attentively. Next students sitting under trees, studying, which made a beautiful picture. At about 4 in the afternoon. We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye.

Now sitting at the table I feel very excited. I will make every effort to go to college.

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求请根据下图，用英语写一篇日记，这种题型较难。首先要仔细观察图片内容，确定写作内容；其次要写出每个图的要点，再对内容加以充实；最后要审视全文，把握好文章主题，结尾点题。写作时注意准确运用时态（本文是日记，多用一般过去时态），上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句where we saw students reading attentively和which made a beautiful picture等；还有词组paid a visit to和make every effort都用得十分恰当。