[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today, an incident impressed me deep. Mom asked me to buy a bag of flour in a shop running by an elderly couple. On the way, it occurred to them that I had no cash with me.

Then I thought I could pay on it with my phone, so I was afraid that they couldn't receive money by phone. After all, they were nearly 70 year old. They might be so much old that they weren't familiar with online service. To my surprise, when I asked an elderly wife if I could pay by phone, she points to the sign on the wall. She said proudly,“Of course, you can scan it!”I felt happy see our advanced society!

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【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。记叙了作者一次购物用手机支付，担心店主夫妇年龄太大无法用手机收钱，结果可以。作者很高兴看到社会的进步。

1.考查副词。句意：今天，一件事给我留下了深刻的印象。impressed me deeply意为“深深地打动了我”。作副词来讲，deep常用来表示具体的深度，而deeply常用于抽象意义上的深度，此处意为“深深地、非常”。故deep改为deeply。

2.考查非谓语动词。句意：妈妈让我去老两口开的商店买一袋面粉。过去分词短语run by an elderly couple作后置定语，并且与a shop形成被动关系，故running改为run。

3.考查代词。句意：在路上，我突然想到我身上没带现金。根据下文中的关键词“I”和语境可知，此处指“我”突然想到，故them改为me。

4.考查固定短语。句意：然后我想我可以用手机支付。固定短语pay for sth.意为“支付某物的费用”。故on改为for。

5.考查连词。句意：我认为我可以用手机支付，但是我担心他们不会用手机收钱。根据上下文语境可知为转折关系，故so改为but。

6.考查名词复数。句意：毕竟，他们都快70岁了。year为可数名词，根据上文70可知此处应该用复数名词years。故year改为years。

7考查固定句式。句意：他们可能太老了，不熟悉在线服务。so…that.…引导结果状语从句，意为“如此……以至于……”，故去掉much。

8.考查冠词。句意：令我惊讶的是，当我问老太太我是否可以用手机付款时，她指着墙上的牌子。定冠词the在此处特指文中的elderly wife。故an改为the。

9.考查时态。句意同上。因为全文用一般过去时叙述过去发生的事情，所以此处也应该用一般过去时。故points改为pointed。

10.考查非谓语动词。句意：我很高兴看到我们先进的社会!不定式短语to see our advanced society在句中作状语，to不能省略。常用结构be／feel happy to do sth意为“高兴做某事”。故happy后添加to。

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【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你上周接待你校美国交换生Jim，带他体验你校以“走近京剧”（Closer to Peking Opera）为主题的社团活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：costume 戏装；spear 矛

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【题目】Directions: Complete the passage with the words in the box. Each word can only be used once. Note that there is one word more than you need.

We live today indebted to McCardell Cashin, Hawes, Wilkins, and Maxwell, and other women who liberated American fashion from the 【1】of Parisian design, Independence came in tying, wrapping, storing, and. rationalizing that wardrobe. These designers established the modern dress code, letting playsuits and other active outfits suit casual clothing, allowing pants to enter the wardrobe, and prizing rationalism and utility in dress, in contradiction to dressing for an occasion. Fashion in America was logical and 【2】 to the will of the women who wore it. American fashion addressed a democracy, whereas traditional Paris-based fashion was standardized and imposed on women, willing or not.

In an earlier time, American fashion had also followed the directions of Paris, or even【3】specific French designs. Designer sportswear was not modeled on that of Europe, as “modern art” would later be; it was

【4】invented and developed in America. Its designers were not high-end with supplementary lines. The design objective and the business commitment were targeted to sportswear, and the distinctive traits were problem-solving ingenuity (独创性)and realistic lifestyle applications. Ease of care was most important: summer dresses and outfits, in particular, were【5】 cotton, readily capable of being washed and pressed at home. Closings were simple, practical, and 【6】 as the modern woman depended on no personal maid to dress her. American designers 【7】 the freedom of women who wore the clothing.

Many have argued, that the women designers of that time 【8】 their own clothing values into a new style. Of course, much of this argument in the 1930s-40s was advanced because there was little or no experience in designing clothes on the basis of utility. But could utility alone 【9】the new ideas of the American designers? Fashion is often regarded as a pursuit of beauty, and some cherished fashion's relationship to the fine arts. What the designers of the American sportswear proved was that fashion is a design art, answering to the demanding needs of service. Of course these practical,【10】 designers have determined the course of late twentieth-century fashion. They were the pioneers of gender equity, in their useful, adaptable clothing, which was both made for the masses and capable of self-expression.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I've learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I'm writing to apply to the position.

First of all, I had graduated from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, What's more, years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and I'm confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his trust.

All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching assistant. I'd appreciate you if you could take my application into consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hun