Question

6．请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述高三生活．

总体印象	快乐、辛苦、压力大
实际生活	1．时间紧，常熬夜 2．作业多，考试多 3．克服困难，不断进步 4．设法放松，看书打球
展望未来	充满信心       快乐高三

注意：1．词数100左右
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述高三生活．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：总体印象；实际生活；展望未来    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：far from远不，远非；meet with遇到；with the help of 在…的帮助之下；Besides除…之外；make full use of充分利用；
As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型一）
 Besides our lessons，of course，we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves，girls reading colorful magazines ad boys playing basketball．（高分句型二） 
Busy and tired as we are，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型三）

解答 Life in Senor
       Life in Senior is both tiring，exciting and meaningful．As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型一）Every minute counts．Working late at night is often the case．There is much homework and we have to take many exams，such as monthly exams．
     We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies．We have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers．  Besides our lessons，of course，we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves，girls reading colorful magazines ad boys playing basketball．（高分句型二） Busy and tired as we are，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．