Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

2．骑自行车的益处，如：节能环保、有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）

注意：1．词数：100词左右；

　　 2．演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．

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Answer 1

One possible version:

Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.

Come on and join us! Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一演讲稿，骑自行车出行。内容提示较详细，考生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题，演讲稿要话语简洁，语气强烈有号召力。根据提示写作主要有三段内容，第一段开门见山点明演讲主题；第二段主体内容叙述汽车的害处，骑自行车的好处；第三段结束语，发起号召，大家都来骑自行车出行。另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时。人称用第一人称复数和第三人称。再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语，应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章符合演讲稿的写作要求，要点齐全，表达思路明确，语言简练，层层深入。个别句子虽长但易于理解。知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如a popular means of transport,; convenience，such as，traffic jams， environmentally friendly，is beneficial to， take the responsibility to等。As is known to all,定语从句；bringing great convenience to—非谓语动词。并注意了句子的衔接如：however，As far as I’m concerned，for one thing--- for another--，therefore等。

考点：应用文——演讲稿