题目内容
国庆长假引发了人们对于旅游景点该不该涨价的热议。上周你们班对此进行了一次热烈的讨论。请根据下面的讨论结果完成短文。
大约90%认为不该涨价 | 10%认为可以适当涨价 |
1.旅游景点是公共资源; 2.更多的人可以享受美景; 3.涨价会增加人们的经济负担。 | 1.景点建设及维护费用增加; 2.避免超负荷的游客量对景点造成破坏。 |
你的观点:…… | |
要求:1.词数120左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词汇:景点scenery spot;维护maintenance。
注意:开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last week my class had a heated discussion about whether prices of scenery spots should be raised.The students held different opinions about it.
Last week my class had a heated discussion about whether prices of scenery spots should be raised.The students held different opinions about it.
About 90 percent of the students think it is not right to raise the prices of some scenery spots.They think those places are public resources,which should be shared by more people.If the prices go up too much,people will have to pay more money.Maybe some people can’t afford it.
However,10 percent of the students think that it is acceptableto raise the prices a little.For one thing, construction and maintenance of scenery sports need more money.For another, raising prices can be an effective way of avoiding too many tourists rushing there in peak time.That may cause some damage to scenery spots.
From my point of view,there is a balanced way that can be considered—raise prices during holidays and lower prices in other time.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是学生很熟悉的正反观点类议论文，要点都已经给出，只需要考生在个人观点方面做发挥。个人观点可以是：在假期里涨价，在其他时间中低价。本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章中可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性
亮点说明：本文中高级句式的运用很出色，如10 percent of the students think that it is acceptable to raise the prices a little.中的形式主语；另外连接词的运用和很到位，如For one thing, For another.
考点：正反观点类议论文书面表达
