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请根据以下提示,结合你生活中的事例,用英语写一篇短文。
   Telling lies is what we are taught not to do, but in some cases, telling lies seems to be what we have to do. 
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
   ②除诗歌外,文体不限;
   ③内容必须结合生活或学习中的一个事例,写出真情实感。
   ④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称;
   ⑤词数不少于120字左右。
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   


With great importance attached to honesty, children are taught not to tell lies. However, there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.
My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English, especially his terrible and strange pronunciation. Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English. Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset. He dared not speak English in class. When asked questions by our English teacher, he was always nervous and embarrassed. The classmates always made fun of him, saying that he was speaking Japanese! Once I met him in the corridor. Therefore I praised that his pronunciation was very special and kind of like Obama's. Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired. He spared no effort to practice speaking English every day.  Now, he can speak English fluently with a perfect accent.
Recently, he told me that it wasn't long before he knew that what I said just a little white lie but he appreciated it badly, without which, he said, he couldn't have achieved such great progress.

解析试题分析:本书面表达是一篇开放式作文,话题是“要不要说谎言?”,贴近考生实际生活,对既定的话题进行讨论,考生有一定的自由发挥空间,畅所欲言,各抒己见。写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如attach to,be poor in,make oneself understood,make fun of, spare no effort to, long before, make great progress , achieve such great progress;并注意了句子的衔接如:however,when,once,before等等。there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.这句用了定语从句,Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English.用了倒装句,Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset.用了非谓语动词,Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired.用了名词性从句。
考点:考查开放式写作

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阅读下面短文,按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文,向《21世纪报》中学生版投稿。
Florence Chadwick was born in California in 1918. She grew up on the beach and began competing as a swimmer at the age of six, when her uncle entered her in a race. For the next 19 years, she continued as a competitive swimmer.
On July 4, 1952, at the age of 34, Chadwick attempted to become the first woman to swim 21 miles across the Catalina Channel, from a port on the California coast. That day the ocean was ice cold, the fog was so thick that she could hardly see the support boats that followed her, and sharks swam around her. Several times, her support crew used guns to drive away the sharks. While Americans watched on televisions, her mother and her trainer, who were in one of the support boats, encouraged her to keep going. However, after 15 hours and 55 minutes, with only a half mile to go, she felt that she couldn’t go on, and begged to be taken out of the water.
Later, Chadwick told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I had seen land I know, I could have made it.” The fog had made her unable to see her swimming goal, and it made her feel she was getting nowhere. Two months later, she tried again. Although the fog was still heavy, yet this time she made it with the goal rooted in her mind. She knew behind the fog was the land she pursued.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文大意;
2.以约120个词就“Goal and Success”的主题谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1)分析Chadwick第一次失败和第二次成功的原因;
2)Chadwick的故事对你有什么启发;
3)结合实际谈谈如何实现自己的目标。
【写作要求】
1.可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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