题目内容
假设你是李华, 距高考还有2个月左右,现在你正在备战高考, 中学生活即将结束, 在这个特殊时期, 请根据以下内容给自己的父母写一封信。
内容要点:
1. 感谢父母多年来, 特别是高三这一年来的关怀。
2. 向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况。
3. 高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously.
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Yours
LI Hua
Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Three. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I will perform my ability in the future exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest.
After the exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person.
My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest!
Best wishes!
Yours
LI Hua
解析试题分析:本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如nothing but,thanks to,make some progress,get along well with, intend to,mean to,have a rest;运用which引导的定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如:especially,because,and,after等等。
考点:提纲类写作
第一节 基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)
【写作内容】
目前,越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演(talent shows)。对此,中学生的看法各有不同。
| 赞同 | 不赞同 |
| 展示才艺,增加社会经验; 增强自信; 有利于学生全面(overall adj.)发展。 | 模仿多,没有自己的风格; 沉迷于“明星梦”,无心学习; 有上当受骗的危险。 |
必须用5个句子表达全部的内容;
将5个句子组成连贯的短文。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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