题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,最近有家网站以“看到有老人摔倒你是否会上前救助”为题邀请公众展开讨论。请你写一篇文章参与该网站的讨论。内容包括:
1. 你的做法
2. 你的原因
3. 你的倡议
注意:1. 可适当增加细节
2. 词数100词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. About this heated discussion, ________________
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【答案】
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. About this heated discussion, in my opinion, I will definitely help the elderly falling down on the street. Below are my reasons.
To begin with, helping others in need is a traditional Chinese virtue. It is by helping the people in trouble that the society is becoming more and more harmonious. Worse still, if we passers-by can’t help the elderly in time, it may increase the risk of losing their lives.
So I strongly advocate that people should give them a hand when facing the situation. Besides, more efforts should be made to guarantee the benefits of people who offer help. Only in this way are people willing to offer help without hesitation.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in my opinion在我看来;To begin with首先;more and more越来越;Beside除此之外;Only in this way are people willing to offer help without hesitation.中only引导的倒装句。