Question

【题目】假如你是高一新生李华，来到学校已经三个多月了。现在请你给在北京大学读书的哥哥写一封信，告诉他你的在校情况并请哥哥分享他的高中学习经验。
说明：1）主要内容：对哥哥的问候，你的在校情况（生活、学习等方面），你的请求。
2）字数要求：100—120（信头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
3）写作要求：内容齐全，行文流畅。
My dear elder brother,
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】My dear elder brother, How are things going? It is more than three months since I came to the new school, where I have learned how to live together with others and how to get along well with all my classmates and teachers as well. I am very happy to be admitted into the Student Union and I am the student in charge of English in my class. In the last two monthly examinations, I did quite well, especially in Chinese and English, ranking No. 66 in Senior One. As you know, it is not my goal. So I have made up my mind to work harder. Of course I need your help. Could you please share your learning experience in science subjects? Wait for your reply. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份，在北京大学读书的哥哥写一封信，告诉他你的在校情况并请哥哥分享他的高中学习经验。主要内容：对哥哥的问候；你的在校情况（生活、学习等方面）；你的请求。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。