题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席,你想参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。要点如下:
1. 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);
2. 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、辩论赛、演讲比赛等);
3. 表达当选的愿望。
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 主席president 竞选 run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
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Thank you.
【答案】Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the president of the English Club. Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students. In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president.
Thank you.
【解析】试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。 其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语, 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一个演讲稿,首先要清晰的表达你想竞选主席;文章第二部分应是本文的主体,写明你的个人优势,以及想到的一些做法,最后再次表达你的愿望,呼吁大家对你的支持。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。条件状语从句的使用:If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students.宾语从句里再套一个宾语从句:I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president.