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请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,词数120.
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
1. 人们认为淡水是取之不尽的(提示:雨水,河水,井水)
2. 实际上淡水是短缺的(提示:人口增加,工业用水增加,污染严重)
3. 我们应当怎么办(提示:节约用水,开发新水源)


People often think that water will never be used up. There is plenty of water, such as rain, water from the rivers and wells. It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage.
In fact water is rather limited on the earth. With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries, water is more needed than before. At the same time, a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day. Some big cities in China are facing the problem of water shortage already. There, water supply is controlled and industry has been restrained.
What should we do about the water shortage? I think, first, the people should be made aware of the real situation about the water. Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted. We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones. In this way I believe that our cities will not be thirsty for water in the future.

解析试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语used up用光;plenty of许多;In fact事实上;At the same time与此同时;In this way用这种方式;It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage.这个句子运用 it seem as if 好象 这个固定句型结构;At the same time, a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day.这个句子运用现在完成时的被动语态。We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones在这个句子中protect 与develop是并列的,所以形式保持一致;
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【小题1】What is the main idea of the passage?

A.Wildcats and their stories.
B.Wildcats and their characters.
C.Varieties of animal species.
D.Relationship between animals and humans.
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A.gasoline companies B.automobile manufacturers
C.brands of automobile D.names of wildcats
【小题3】Which of the following would people like to have or trust according to the passage?
A.Wildcat congressmen. B.Wildcat oil wells.
C.Wildcat banks. D.Wildcat cars.
【小题4】It can be inferred that during the days of wildcat money__________.
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[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点。
2.以约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法,内容包括:
(1)读完这则新闻,你有什么感受?
(2)假如你是车上的一名乘客,你会怎样做?
(3)就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。
[写作要求]
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
 
 
 
 

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