题目内容
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer.
In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met . Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.
Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
【小题1】第一句：pleasing改成pleased
【小题2】第一句：greatly改成great
【小题3】第二句：your改成my
【小题4】第三句：In改成At
【小题5】第三句：as和shopping之间加a
【小题6】第四句：去掉have
【小题7】第五句：and改成but
【小题8】第五句：works 改成work
【小题9】第六句：after 改成before
【小题10】第七句：solve改成solving
解析试题分析：
【小题1】第一句：pleasing改成pleased. 固定结构Be pleased to do sth.开心地做某事。故将pleasing改成pleased.
【小题2】第一句：greatly改成great. 分析语境a great time ：一段精彩的时光。Greatly为副词，此处应该用形容词词性，故将greatly改成great.
【小题3】第二句：your改成my. 分析语境Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer. 我将和你分享我的暑期工作经历。根据句意可知应为“我的工作经历”，故将your改成my.
【小题4】第三句：In改成At. 固定结构At the beginning of sth.：在某事的开始阶段。故将In改成At.
【小题5】第三句：as和shopping之间加a. 分析语境I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket我被一家超市雇为一名导购。A shopping guide：一名导购。名词前应有冠词修饰，此处不是特指，所以用a表示泛指。故在as和shopping之间加a.
【小题6】第四句：去掉have. 分析语境smiled to everyone I met 对我遇到的每一个人微笑。I met 为省略了关系词的定语从句，先行词为everyone。故去掉have.
【小题7】第五句：and改成but. 根据原文 Sometimes I was laughed at和I was praised for my wonderful works by many people有时候我会被嘲笑，大多数情况下，许多人因我出色的工作表现而夸奖我。可知，前后文之间为转折关系，故将and改成but.
【小题8】第五句：works 改成work. 根据原文I was praised for my wonderful work by many people人们因我出色的工作表现赞扬我。Work表示“工作”的时候为不可数名词。故将works 改成work.
【小题9】第六句：after 改成before. 分析语境Half a month passed quickly before I knew it不知不觉半个月很快过去了。Before：在...之前。句意为“在我意识到时间流逝之前半个月过去了”。故将after 改成before.
【小题10】第七句：solve改成solving. 分析语境I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem我意识到微笑是解决任何问题的关键。可知to为介词，后面应该接名词，故用solve的动名词形式，故将solve改成solving.
When most of us hear the word chocolate, the verb that comes to mind is probably “eat”, not “drink”, and the most proper adjective would seem to be “sweet”. But for about 90 percent of chocolate’s long history, it was strictly a beverage (饮料), and sugar didn’t have anything to do with it.
The Origin of Chocolate
Many modern historians have estimated that chocolate has been around for about 2000 years, but recent research suggests that it may be even older.
In the book The True History of Chocolate, authors Sophie and Michael Coe prove that the earliest linguistic (语言学的) evidence of chocolate consumption dates back three or even four thousand years.
Valuable and Fashionable Chocolate Beverage
It’s hard to discover exactly when chocolate was born, but it’s clear that it was cherished from the start. For several centuries in pre-modern Latin America, cacao beans were considered valuable enough to use as currency. 100 beans could purchase a good turkey hen, according to a 16th-century Aztec document.
Sweetened chocolate didn’t appear until Europeans discovered the Americas and sampled (品尝) the native cuisine. Chocolate didn’t suit the foreigners’ taste at first — one described it in his writings as “a bitter drink for pigs” — but once mixed with honey or cane sugar, it quickly became popular throughout Spain. By the 17th century, chocolate was a fashionable drink throughout Europe, believed to have nutritious, medicinal functions. But it remained largely a privilege of the rich until the invention of the steam engine made mass production possible in the late 1700s.
The Birth of Solid Chocolate
In 1828, a Dutch chemist found a way to make powdered chocolate. His product became known as “Dutch cocoa”, and it soon led to the creation of solid chocolate. In 1847, Joseph Fry created the first modern chocolate bar. By 1868, a little company called Cadbury was marketing boxes of chocolate candies in England. Milk chocolate hit the market a few years later.
Prosperous Chocolate Industry
In America, chocolate was so valued during the Revolutionary War that it was used instead of wages. Even now, statistics show that the humble cacao bean is still a powerful economic force. Chocolate manufacturing is a more than 4-billion-dollar industry in the United States, and the average American eats at least half a pound of the stuff per month.
【小题1】The earliest chocolate was most probably _________.
| A．a dish | B．a drink | C．a bar | D．a candy |
| A．the history of chocolate is at most 4,000 years. |
| B．people around the world could buy things with chocolate. |
| C．chocolate was well paid attention to since it was born. |
| D．an American at least eats a pound of chocolate per month. |
| A．Because chocolate was so tasty and bitter. |
| B．Because chocolate was believed to be a source of nutrition. |
| C．Because chocolate was sweetened with honey or cane sugar. |
| D．Because chocolate became a fashionable beverage. |
| A．chocolate beverage----chocolate bar----chocolate candies----milk chocolate |
| B．chocolate bar----chocolate beverage----chocolate candies----milk chocolate |
| C．chocolate bar ----chocolate candies ----milk chocolate ---- chocolate beverage |
| D．chocolate beverage ----chocolate candies----chocolate bar---- milk chocolate |
假设你是张华，你收到英国笔友Bob的一封电子邮件（见表一），请根据邮件内容和你所获得的海报（见表二）所提供的信息，给Bob回一封电子邮件。
(表一)
| Dear Zhang Hua, How are you getting on recently? I’m so glad to tell you that I have planned to go to Beijing to study Chinese in my coming holiday. Would you please help me find a Chinese training school, and give me some information about it? Write back soon. Bob |
| LET’S TALK IN CHINESE Course: Chinese for beginners Time: January 20—February 19 Place: No. 1 Lecture Hall Tuition: 2,000 RMB Fore more information: www.feiyue.org Feiyue Language School |
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文章的开头和结束已给出。
Dear Bob,
I’m so delighted to learn
Yours,
Li Hua
新课程实施以来，有些学校取消了晚自习，你所在的班级学生对是否取消晚自习展开了一次讨论。请结合以下讨论内容用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。
| 赞成观点 | 反对观点 |
| 1.能给学生更多的自主学习和休息时间； 2.有时间发展个人爱好。 | 1.相对在家自习，在校学习效率更高； 2.通过师生交流，生生交流，学习问题可以得到及时解决。 |
| 你的观点…… | |
Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. ________________________________________________________________________
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厦门方特梦幻王国(Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom)是我国新建的一座大型主题公园。假设你叫张娟，请根据以下内容给外国朋友凯特写一封邮件，介绍这一主题公园，并邀请她暑假一起到那里游玩。
[ 写作内容 ]
| 位置 | 美丽的海滨城市厦门 |
| 开放时间 | 2013年4月28日 |
| 面积 | 约240公顷 |
| 特色 | 以科幻和互动体验而出名，将高科技与中国传统文化相融合，创造出一个充满 幻想和刺激的神奇天地 |
| 主要活动 | 精彩表演、多种娱乐活动 |
公顷 hectare 科幻 science fiction 互动interaction 高科技 high-tech
[写作要求]
1.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数；
2.必须用5个句子表达全部所给的内容；
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Kate ,
I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you
Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Juan