Question

假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I, together with my two friends, were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant, locating in the center of New York. I noticed the young woman eating with two kids. We stopped by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa. The elder boy, whom was about seven years old, pointed his younger sister and said, “She does, but I don’t.” I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner, I paid for theirs, either. I didn’t know that whether the woman was alone, but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone. I still feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways.

 

Answer 1

1.was ---were

2.locating--located

3.the—a

4.he--they

5.whom---who

6.pointed后面加at

7.either---too

8.know that中that删除

9.grow--grew

10.on--in

【解析】

1.was ---were 考查主谓一致。I together with my two friends，谓语动词与 I 保持一致。

2.locating--located 考查非谓语动词。Be located in 位于。。，做伴随状语。

3.the—a 考查冠词。句意：我注意有一个年轻人跟两个孩子一块吃饭。A 表示泛指。

4.he—they 考查代词。句意：我们走过去，问孩子们，他们是否相信圣诞老人。

5.whom---who 考查定语从句。句意：这个年长的男孩，大约只有七岁，指着小妹妹说，她相信，我不信。Whom不能代指主语，故用who.

6.pointed后面加at 考查动词短语。Point at 指着。

7.either---too 考查副词。句意：我告诉他圣诞老人真实存在的，当我们去值钱时，我也替他们付钱了。表示肯定的也，用too.

8.know that中that删除 考查宾语从句。句意：我知道这个女性是否孤独。宾语从句引导词that与whether不能共存。

9.grow--grew 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般过去时来叙述，故用过去式。

10.on—in 考查介词。In some small ways 用这种小小的方法。

考点：短文改错。