题目内容
假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：
1．礼物选择：
2．你的理由；
3．其它和解建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
Best wishes,
Li Hua
1．礼物选择：
2．你的理由；
3．其它和解建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
Best wishes,
Li Hua
a possible version：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
试题分析：本文要求写一封邮件，同学们对此形式非常熟悉，内容也和学生的生活联系密切，所以写起来应该是得心应手，写作时应注意的问题是：一、仔细审题，写邮件的目的是就道歉的事情寻求建议，所以内容要围绕三个要点展开。二、在写邮件时要开门见山提出写信的目的，就本文而言要首先表明自己对礼物的建议。三、在篇章结构方面，要注意层次性和逻辑性，尤其是在解释理由方面，可以使用一些表示层次的连词，如firstly、secondly、besides、what’s more等。四、在语言方面，要简洁明了，尽量使用多种句式结构以提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，层次清晰。开头用虚拟语气的句子委婉地提出了自己的建议。在解释原因和提出其他建议时，作者用到了as far as I know 、in the meanwhile 、besides、apart from等词汇和短语，使段落非常具有层次性，而且还用到了定语从句which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.状语从句Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body，No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.等复合句，显示了作者对句型结构的准确把握，成为了文章的亮点。
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