Question

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

A couple said, “ We love our kid, so we’ll arrange everything for him and pave (铺) the way for his success.”

要求：1. 请就此材料发表你的看法；

2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

3. 词数不少于60词。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

There is a common phenomenon nowadays that parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success, which is of great concern.

I’m strongly opposed to this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. For another, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development.

Only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and develop by themselves can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求写一篇关于如何教育孩子的文章，来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语be strongly opposed to强烈反对；be bad for 对。。有坏处；Only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and develop by themselves can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.这个句子中考查到only +状语 +部分倒装 的结构；

考点： 材料类作文