题目内容
18.假设你是李华,一个英国学生社团下周将到你就读的启明中学进行为期一天的参观访问,你负责接待工作.请根据下面的提示给对方的负责人Mr.Steven 写一封邮件,商讨参观事宜.1.自我介绍;
2.参观安排;上午参观校园;中午食堂用餐;下午交流活动;晚上举办欢迎晚会;
3.征询对方的其它要求.
注意:1.词数:120-l50,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mr.Steven,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Qiming Secondary School.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,给下周将到启明中学进行为期一天参观访问的一个英国社团负责人写一封电子邮件,商讨参观事宜.
写作时人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,时态以一般将来时为主.
写作要点:1.自我介绍; 2.参观安排:上午参观校园;中午食堂用餐;下午交流活动;晚上举办欢迎晚会; 3.征求对方的其它要求.
重要短语:be in charge of (负责),exchange ideas (交流想法),pick up sb(用车接某人),show sb around (带领某人参观),allow sb to do sth(允许某人做某事),be supposed to do sth(理应,应该做某事),arrange sth (安排某事),talk about sth (谈论某物),inform sb (通知,告诉某人),in time (及时),make changes (作出变化).
【高分句型】
1.we'll show you around our campus,which will allow you to get a general impression of our school.
这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在定语从句中作主语,指代前面整个主句的内容.
2.①If you have any other request,please inform me in time ②so that we can make some possible changes to the visiting schedule.
①这里是由if引导的条件状语从句,主句为please inform me in time so that we can make some possible changes to the visiting schedule.
②这里是由so that 引导的目的状语从句,从句中有情态动词"can",意为"以便于".
解答 Dear Mr.Jones,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Qiming Secondary School.I'm in charge of your visit to our school next week and I'm writing toexchange ideas about the arrangements for you.(自我介绍)
You'll be picked up at the airport and after a short rest,we'll show you around ourcampus,which will allow you to get a general impression of our school.【高分句型】Then you're supposed to visit our teaching buildings,the school stadium and thedormitories as well.After that,we will have lunch together in the school canteen.In the afternoon,a free talk will be arranged,so we can talk about theschool life and different cultures of the two countries.In the evening,there will be a welcomeparty for you.(参观安排)
If you have any other request,please inform me in time so that we can make some possiblechanges to the visiting schedule.【高分句型】(征询其它方面的要求)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
-____.1got there ten minutes before it ended.( )
| A. | Not at all | B. | Not exactly | C. | Not especially | D. | Not really |
| A. | have tried; a success | B. | have been tried; successful | ||
| C. | has tried; to be successful | D. | has been tried; successful |
| A. | took | B. | is taking | C. | had taken | D. | has been taking |
| A. | Leave | B. | Leaving | C. | Left | D. | To leave |
-Only about five minutes.Alisa here with me.( )
| A. | walks | B. | walked | C. | has walked | D. | had walked |
| A. | when | B. | unless | C. | since | D. | before |