题目内容
【题目】请修改下面这篇短文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Stephen Hawking, the brilliant figure in the modern history of physics, passed away on March 14. He is famous for his work on black holes or relativity. Although he was not able to speak or write, but he published many best-sellers on science, included A Brief History of Time. We admire him not only for that he did, bit also for his positive attitude towards life. He even appears in several films and sitcoms as a humorous man. Hawking was great. His dead made many people sad and they said they would learn him. All of us should try his best to live more meaningful.
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【解析】本文主要讲了科学巨匠霍金的去世，令许多人感到悲伤。
考查冠词。泛指“一位杰出的人物”，且brilliant首字母发音是辅音，所以用不定冠词a，the改成a。
考查连词。“黑洞”和“相对论”之间是并列关系，所以or改成and。
考查固定用法。Although与but不能连用，所以删除but。
考查included与including 用法的区别。included 是过去分词形式的形容词，在表示“包括……在内”时常放在被修饰的名词或代词之后，起着补充说明的作用，including 是现在分词，在许多情况下用作介词，后面直接接宾语，含有补充说明之意，所以included改成including。
考查宾语从句。what he did作介词for的宾语，所以what he did是一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中作did的宾语，所以that改成what。
考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以appears改成appeared。
考查名词。作句子主语用名词，所以dead改成death。
考查固定短语。句意为他们说他们将向他学习。learn from向…学习，是固定短语，所以learn后加from。
考查代词。我们所有人都应该尽我们最大的努力生活的更有意义。表示“尽我们最大的努力”，所以his改成our。
考查副词。修饰动词live，用副词，所以meaningful改成meaningfully。
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