题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
【答案】
After school, I was about to enter in﹨to my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie
lying
beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of
with
sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he
looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
energetic
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy,
if/whether surprise
they agreed. Up to now, he has become∧ member of our family and everyone had enjoyed
a has
his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I
Looking
offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
Us
【解析】
试题分析:本文为我们讲述了作者收留一只流浪狗的事情。
【1】 第一处:enter相当于come/go into,本身就含有into;所以此处是多余的。故答案为去掉into。
【2】 第二处:see sb. doing sth.表示看见某人正在做某事;此处表示看到一只狗正躺在垃圾桶旁边。故答案为lie改为lying。
【3】 第三处:fill sb. with sth.或be filled with是固定表达,意思是某人充满了……。故答案为of改为with。
【4】 第四处:根据前面的looked,可知系动词后面应该接形容词表示状态。故答案为energy改为energetic。
【5】 第五处:根据句意,当我父母回家的时候,我问他们是否我能养这条狗。故答案为that改为if/whether。
【6】 第六处:to one’s +名词,意思是令某人……的是。后面的名词joy也是提示。故答案为surprised改为surprise。
【7】 第七处:member是可数名词,此处表示它已经成为了我们家的一员。故答案为在member前加a。
【8】 第八处:根据前面的has become和句意可知本句应该用现在完成时。故答案为had改为has。
【9】 第九处:本句中的realize是谓语,而前面的look是状语,与主语I之间是主动关系,所以应该用现在分词表主动。故答案为Looked改为Looking。
【10】 第十处:根据句意,他给我们带来了很多快乐和笑声。如果动作的发出者和承受者是同一个人时,才会用反身代词,本句的主语是他,宾语是我们。故答案为ourselves改为us。
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