Question

7．Following a four-day meeting of the Communist Party of China Central Committee in Beijing，the central government announces that China allows two children for every couple．
The People's Congress at provincial level or its standing committee has revised local regulations or made new ones，with the support and guidance of the National Health and Family Planning Commission，Jiang said．
"The number of new births will definitely increase in the coming years and we estimate that the peak will be over 20million newborn babies，"said Wang Pei'an，vice-minister of the National Health and Family Planning Commission．
At present，about 60percent of China's child-bearing women are over 35years old，which means an increase of'elderly'mothers will be witnessed in China in the next few years，Wang said in a news release on Friday．
"It's safe to say that the two-child policy won't bring huge pressure on food security and basic public services，such as health，education and employment，"Wang said．He estimated that another 30million working people aged between 15and 59will be added by 2050．"It will benefit economic growth in the long term，"Wang added．
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120个单词就"二胎政策"这一话题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你同意你父母亲生二胎吗？表明你的态度并说明理由（至少2点）；
（2）试分析中国实行二胎政策的好处．（至少两点）
参考词汇：兄弟姐妹：sibling
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用文中原句．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
3．不必写标题．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
On a personal note，the long-awaited move immediately excited me，because having a sibling is what I have been dreaming about
高分句型二：
As is mentioned in the passage，the two-child policy is bound to increase the fertility rate and control the aging population
句型一 is what I have been dreaming about 该句是一个由what引导的表语从句，what在从句中充当dream about的宾语
句型二 As is mentioned in the passage…该句是一个由as引导的费限制性定语从句，as在从句中作主语，替代后面整个主句的内容
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
take care of 照顾   above all 最为重要的是
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 The passage tells us the latest release of the two-child policy and analyzes its prospect and the positive effects it may have on China．（大意概括）
    On a personal note，the long-awaited move immediately excited me，because having a sibling is what I have been dreaming about．（高分句型一）With a sibling around，never will I feel lonely．In addition，I can shoulder part of the responsibility to take care of the baby，and thus learn to take care of others．Above all，I can share my joys and sorrows with another family member．（个人观点）
    In the same way，the new policy means much more than giving children．It is expected to help to change China's negative population trends．As is mentioned in the passage，the two-child policy is bound to increase the fertility rate and control the aging population．（高分句型二）Besides，it will also help to solve an imbalance between boys and girls．（二胎政策好处）

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．