Question

15．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华?你的美国朋友Peter 想了解你平时使用网络的情况?
请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．你每周平均使用网络的时长；
2．你使用网络做什么；
3．使用网络对你学习和生活的影响?
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数?
Dear Peter，
I'd love to share my experience of using the Internet with you．On average，I use the Internet 3 to 5 hours a week．Most of the time，I go online tocompleteprojects or finishhomework，which I think is the fastest way to get the information I need．（高分句型一）I also do online shopping，watch movies，chat with friends and play games in my spare time．
On one hand，I find using the Internet helpful to my studiesand it makes my life easier and more convenient．On the other hand，however，it takesup too much of my time．With so manyfun things to do online，I sometimes cannot focus on school work．（高分句型二）It is easy to get addicted to online games or chatting with friends．Therefore，spending too much time online can be a problem，too．（高分句型三）
What are your thoughts about the best way to use the Internet？Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给美国的朋友回复邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你每周平均使用网络的时长；你使用网络做什么；使用网络对你学习和生活的影响?2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：On average平均；go online 上网；in my spare time在空闲时间；On one hand，一方面On the other hand另一方面；focus on专注于；get addicted to上瘾；Therefore因此；hear from收到…的来信；

解答 Dear Peter，
     I'd love to share my experience of using the Internet with you．On average，I use the Internet 3 to 5 hours a week．Most of the time，I go online to complete projects or finish homework，which I think is the fastest way to get the information I need．（高分句型一）I also do online shopping，watch movies，chat with friends and play games in my spare time．
     On one hand，I find using the Internet helpful to my studies and it makes my life easier and more convenient．On the other hand，however，it takes up too much of my time．With so many fun things to do online，I sometimes cannot focus on school work．（高分句型二）It is easy to get addicted to online games or chatting with friends．Therefore，spending too much time online can be a problem，too．（高分句型三）
    What are your thoughts about the best way to use the Internet？Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．