Question

20．最近一项调查表明，将近有50%的学生不吃早餐，请用英语写一篇文章．
内容包括：1．不吃早餐的害处及原因
2..你的建议
注意：1．词数100左右 （开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文内容充实连贯．
A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．
They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇传统作文，中文提示即文章的主要内容，考生切入容易，内容贴近考生生活，考试有话可说，可以有感而发．具有一定的生活性．要求学生根据中文提示，分析不吃早餐的原因，后果和根据这个现象提出一定的建议，考试要在表达的时候适当使用高级词汇，句型和各种连接词，使文章连贯，自然，句型多样化，有利于分数档次的提高．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：tend to 倾向于；In addition另外； In fact事实上
It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）句中使用了who引导的限制性定语从句

解答 A study shows that nearly 50% percent of the students don't have breakfast．They tend to feel sleepy in class and have bad memories，so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test．（高分句型）   
    Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．In addition，a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．
    In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy，which helps improve the efficiency of their studying．（高分句型）So school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．