题目内容
【题目】共享单车(sharingbikes)的出现,为大家带来了方便.同时,也反映出一些问题.例如,随意停放,影响行人通行;故意破坏车辆,造成维护成本增加,并影响他人正常使用,等等.请针对此现象,写一封倡议书,号召大家文明用车.
要点提示:
1、共享单车的好处;
2、使用过程中出规的问题;
3、如何做到文明用车.
写作要求:
1、文章要涵盖上述要点,并适当增加细节.
2、字数:不少于100字.
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【答案】MyViewsonSharingbikes Presently,inbigcitieslikeShanghaiandGuangzhou,sharingbikeshavebecomeincreasinglypopular.Alargenumberofsharingbikescanbefoundandrentedatalowprice.(高分句型一)Moreover,youcanparkthebikealmostanywhereyoulike.Urbantransportationhas thusbeenmademuchmoreconvenientandevenrevolutionized.However,alongwithitsrapiddevelopment,sharingbikesalsobringsomeproblems,includingrandomparking,vandalismandpossessionofsharingbikes,etc.(高分句型二)
Tosolvetheseproblems,therearesomemeasuresfortheauthoritiestotake.Firstly,thegovernmentcouldimplementmorestrictlawsandrulestoregulatetheoperationandmanagementofsharingbikes.Secondly,thepublicshouldraisetheirawarenessofusingsharingbikesreasonably.Lastly,urbantransportationsystemshouldbeupgradedandimprovedtoaccommodateautomobiles,bikesandpedestrians.
Toconclude,asensibleattitudeshouldbeheldtowardsharingbikes.Witheffectiveandefficientmeasurestaken,andeffortsmadebythoseinvolved,itcanbeexpectedthatsharingbikeswillplayacontributiveandconstructiveroleinurbanpublictransportation.(高分句型三)
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封倡议书。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一封倡议书:共享单车(sharing bikes)的出现,为大家带来了方便。同时,也反映出一些问题.例如,随意停放,影响行人通行;故意破坏车辆,造成维护成本增加,并影响他人正常使用,等等。请针对此现象,写一封倡议书,号召大家文明用车。要点提示:共享单车的好处;使用过程中出规的问题;如何做到文明用车。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:sharing bikes(共享单车);become increasingly popular(变得越来越受欢迎);Urban transportation(城市交通);(城市公共交通)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。