Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

Answer 1

【小题1】as---when
【小题2】rings---rang
【小题3】She---It
【小题4】a---the
【小题5】full前加was
【小题6】bad→ badly
【小题7】opening ---opened
【小题8】In---To
【小题9】about 去掉
【小题10】which---that

解析试题分析:一天当作者在厨房做饭的时候，电话铃突然响了起来。她匆忙去接电话，原来是她的一位老朋友。她们在电话里聊了起来。忘记了关掉煤气炉。直到听到警报声她才跑回厨房，发现做的牛肉烧焦了，而这时两个消防员也赶到了。
【小题1】as---when考查连词。I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings。 As 引导时间状语从句表示伴随或者强调动作同时发生，此处是be doing …..when句型，意思是：正在做某事这时发生了某种情况。把as改为when。
【小题2】.rings---rang 考查动词时态。I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings。文章讲述的是过去的事情，所以应该用一般过去时，把rings改为rang。
【小题3】She---It考查代词。She was my close friend。在英语中如果不知道性别，则用it代替，比如敲门时问“who is it？”，把She改为It。
【小题4】.a---the考查冠词。When we were talking on a phone。固定短语：on the phone“通过电话”，把a 改为the。
【小题5】. full前加was 考查谓语动词。The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt。and连接的是并列句，前面句子缺少谓语动词，此处表示主语的状态，所以在room后加was。
【小题6】bad→ badly 考查副词。 The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt。修饰动词应该用副词形式，把bad改为badly。
【小题7】.opening ---opened 考查动词。I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows and then went out of the house.。and连接并列成分放在最后两个词的中间，由此判断此处是三个连续的动作，应该把opening改为opened。
【小题8】In---To 考查介词。In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house。固定短语：to one’s surprise“使人吃惊的是”。
【小题9】about 去掉 考查介词。I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke。动词短语：tell sb sth，“告诉某人某事”，tell是及物动词，去掉about。
【小题10】which---that 考查代词。I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 由句意可知此处是强调句型：it was……that ，所以把which改为that。
考点：考查短文改错