Question

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They
find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing while they
are walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places
that people has never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it
not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be
passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer 1

【小题1】held前加been
【小题2】删去to
【小题3】deep—deeply
【小题4】relaxing—relaxed
【小题5】has—have
【小题6】删去been
【小题7】because后加of
【小题8】life—lives
【小题9】so—such
【小题10】which—that

解析试题分析：文章介绍了我们班级针对远足进行的讨论。
【小题1】本句话是指讨论被举行，应该使用被动语态的形式。
【小题2】固定词组make sb do sth让某人做某事。
【小题3】用副词deeply修饰动词attract。
【小题4】对指人的主语进行说明使用过去分词转换的形容词relaxed。
【小题5】主语是people，谓语动词用复数形式。
【小题6】happen没有被动语态。故这里不应该有been。
【小题7】后面是名词poor knowledge of hiking.，故使用because of。
【小题8】前面是形容词性物主代词their故后面使用复数形式lives.
【小题9】后面是名词短语dangerous activities,故使用such。而不是so，so后面接形容词或者副词。
【小题10】that引导同位语从句解释名词suggestion的内容。that在句中不充当任何成分，只起连接作用。
考点：考查短文改错