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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

What do you want to say to your parents?

With the college entrance examination is drawing near, my parents are getting more and more anxious about me. They have bought a lot of learning material and healthful recipes for me, hoped that I can work harder and make a greater progress in my learning. However, what they did make me stressed out. But I would like to say the following words to them:

Dear Mum and Dad, please don’t push me too hard. I know I have to work hard to admitted into my dream university. Now with only months left, I have made up your mind to make full use of every minute to improve my study. I will be faced for the challenge brave and make my dream come true.

 

1.With-As/去掉is

2.material-materials

3. hoped-hoping

4.去掉a

5. make-makes

6. But-So

7.admitted前面∧be

8.your-my

9.for - with

10.brave-bravely

【解析】

1.】“随着”With+宾语+宾补结构中，高考和临近是主动关系，用非谓语动词doing形式，去掉is，或者用连词As加从句，因此可以With-As/去掉is。

2.父母给我买了许多学习资料，a lot of learning materials。许多修饰名词资料，“资料”应该用复数形式material-materials。

3.父母买资料希望我能更加努力，前后同一个主语“父母”，和希望是主动关系，用非谓语动词doing形式， hoped-hoping。

4.取得进步make progress，“进步”是不可数名词前面不能用冠词，因此去掉a 。

5. 父母做的事是主语从句，从句做主语，谓语用单数形式，因此make-makes。

6. 父母的行为让我倍感压力因此有话想和父母说。前后是因果关系。But-So 。

7. “被录取”是短语be admitted into，不定式后面用动词原形，因此admitted前面∧be 。

8.我下定决心，“我的决心”中代词使用错误，因此your-my 。

9.“面对”是固定短语be faced with something，因此介词for – with。

10.副词修饰动词，副词形式“勇敢地”修饰动词“面对”，brave-bravely。

考点：短文改错

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