Question

目前，青少年追星成为一个非常普遍的现象。有些青少年对偶像崇拜(celebrity worship)近乎痴迷。请你就青少年追星这一话题写一篇英语短文。要点包括:

1. 你如何看待青少年追星这一现象;

2. 青少年追星对其自身有何影响。

注意:

可适当增加细节，以使内容完整充实。

词数： 120 左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

These days probably every teenager in the world has a poster of someone they worship stuck on their wall .For some teens , celebrity worship is simply a part of maturing and entering the adolescent world .There is nothing to worry about .Celebrities who promote ethical behavior and make responsible personal decisions can have a positive effect on teenagers .But for some teenagers who develop an unhealthy obsession with a celebrity , parents and teachers should pay a lot of attention .They are so obsessed with celebrities that they cannot concentrate on their studies .They expect to live like a celebrity so that they often do something impractical .

While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities , parents should take action if they suspect a teen is too obsessed with celebrities and becoming indifferent to school .They should encourage their children to become involved with school activities .Also , I think the celebrities should set a good example of how to live and act to have positive effects on their fans.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求就青少年追星这一话题写一篇英语短文。要点包括:1. 你如何看待青少年追星这一现象;2. 青少年追星对其自身有何影响。写作时要注意：1.使用一般现在时；2.可以使用两段来分别介绍两个要点；3. 注意连词的恰当使用。4.写作时尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构，以提高文章档次，增加得分点。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构清晰，层次分明，语言通顺流畅。作者首段介绍了当今这种崇拜明星，追星的现象，提出自己的观点。第二段阐明了盲目追星对青少年的不良影响。在文中作者使用了高级词汇obsess，promote，impractical等。还有定语从句who promote ethical behavior，状语从句While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities ,的使用也提高了文章的档次。

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