Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误；

2．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday morning I went to city library to do some reading. I had just got off the bus when I saw two foreign student reading a map at the street corner, with a puzzling expression on their faces. Obvious, they had trouble finding their destination, so I went over and asked that I could do for them. They told me that they wanted to visit the Haiminghu Lake Resort, so didn’t know how to get here. Hearing this, I showed them to the nearest bus stop and tell them which bus to take. When I saw them get on the bus, I felt very proud of me because of I was able to help foreigners with my poor English.

Answer 1

1.city前添加the

2.将student 变为students

3.将puzzlling改为puzzled

4.将Obvious改为Obviously

5.将that改为 what

6.将so改为but

7.将here改成there

8.将tell改为told

9.me改为myself

10.of去掉

【解析】

1.文中第一句，在city前添加the 。city library市立图书馆是专有名词，一般由普通名词组成的专有名词e，前面要添加定冠词the。故在city前添加the

2.student 变为students原句中是two foreign student2个外国学生。出现两个以及两个以上的名词要用复数。故将student 变为students

3.将puzzling改为puzzled。根据原句 的意思是，脸上带着困惑的表情。,-ed是表示状态,-ing则是形容给别人的感觉。Puzzling使为难的；puzzled困惑的、糊涂的。故将puzzling改为puzzled

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5. what。因为前面有动词ask，所以这里应该是一个宾语从句，that 引导的宾语从句中that可以省略且不影响句子意思，但是这里去掉之后句意就发生了改变。单独来看，我能为你做什么，本身就是一个固定的句子what can I do for you，特殊因疑问词引导的宾语从句，特殊疑问词不变只需要调整变成陈述句即可。故将将that改为 what

6.but。原句They told me that they wanted to visit the Haiminghu Lake Resort, so didn’t know how to get here. 他们告诉我他们想去海鸣湖，但是不知道怎么去那里。从上下两个句子来看，是转折关系，所以中间连词要用but，故将so改为but

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9. 。Me作为代词宾格，只能在句子中做宾语。原句I felt very proud of me 中I是主语，felt是谓语，宾语是proud，用了me句子成分重复，故将me改为myself。

10. of 的用法区别because+句子；because of+v-doing/n.原句 because of I was able to help foreigners with my poor English.后面是一个句子，故将of去掉。

考点：考察时态、宾语从句、冠词等。