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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
     增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
     删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    College students have a little ways to pay their college fees．Many students have their parents to pay the fees．Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus．Apart from this，many good student can win a scholarship．By this way they can pay at least part of the fees．As to me，I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough．Beside my study，I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math，physics，chemistry and English，as I'm very good at these important subjects．Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship．

分析 本文主要介绍了作者以及广大的大学生们通常都是如何解决上大学的费用的；如文中提到，有许多学生都是让父母交费；有些学生申请银行贷款；其他的学生将会依靠在校园内外找兼职工作来赚钱交费；还有很多好学生依靠自己的奖学金以及父母的资助；而则作者想通过从事一份做家教的兼职工作或努力学习赢得奖学金来减轻父母的负担．

解答 College students have a little ways to pay their college fees．Many students have
their parentsto pay the fees．Some students may applytoa bank loan and others
will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus．Apart from this，many good
student can win a scholarship．By this way they can pay at least part of the fees．As
to me，I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are∧rich enough．Beside
my study，I will take up a part-time job byteachsome high school students math，physics，
chemistry and English，as I'm very good at these important subjects．Of course I will also
work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship．
详解：
1．little改为few    考查形容词    a little修饰不可数名词，这里修饰可数名词ways，故用a few．
2．去掉pay之前的to    考查固定结构   have sb．do sth．意为：使某人做某事，have后面接不带to的不定式，故去掉pay之前的to．
3．to改为for    考查固定短语       apply to 意为：适用于，应用于；  apply for意为：申请；此处的意思是：一些学生会申请银行贷款，故用for．
4．student改为students   考查名词的单复数    此处指的是许多学生，故用复数名词students．
5．By改为In    考查固定短语     By the way：顺便说一下；In this way：这样，用这种方法；此处指的是：这样，他们至少可以支付部分费用；故用In．
6．their改为my      考查人称代词      此处用来修饰名词fees，指的是：我的学费；故用my．
7．are之后加not     考查句意理解     由于前面提到：我让父母付一半的学费，可知是因为他们不够有钱；故在are之后加not．    
8．Beside 改为Besides    考查介词    Beside意为：在…旁边；Besides意为：除…之外；本句的意思是：除了学习之外，我还要做一份兼职工作；故用Besides．
9．teach 改成teaching    考查动名词     此处用在介词by之后作宾语；故用teaching．
10．to改成that   考查固定结构     in order to后接动词原形；in order that后接从句；由于此处之后"I can easily win a scholarship"是一个句子；故用that．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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