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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid having word. Last Tuesday Zhang Fan stayed up doing his homework before 10:30 pm in the dormitory. Feeling tiring, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But he couldn’t fall sleeping with lights on. He became so much angry that he lost his temper, complaining about Zhang’s selfishness. None of them was willing to say sorry but the quarrel continued. I managed to calm them down and said we should all put us in others’ shoes. They realized they were wrong and make up finally. Only when we think more for others can we create enjoyable environment.

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【解析】1.word改为words考查名词。许多学生住在宿舍，很难避免说话。说话应该用复数形式，故将word改为words。

2.before改为after考查连词。根据后边Li Hua went to bed immediately.李华马上就上床睡觉了，根据常识，可知应该在晚上十点半之后，不应该是在之前，故将before改为after。

3.tiring改为tired考查形容词。感到疲惫的用tired，tiring是让人感到疲惫的，故将tired改为tiring。

4.sleeping改为asleep考查形容词。入睡fall asleep，sleeping睡着的，故将sleeping改为asleep。

5.去掉much考查固定搭配。如此…以至于…so +adj +that…，故将much去掉。

6.None改为Neither考查代词。根据文章可知这里是指李华和张芳两个人的争吵，两者之间都不应该用neither，none用于三者以上。

7.but改为so/and考查连词。两个人都不屈服，争吵继续下去。这两句之间是因果关系或者顺接关系，而不是转折关系，故将but改为so或者and。

8. us改为ourselves考查代词。短语put oneself in other’s shoes站在别人的立场上，故将us改为ourselves。

9.make改为made考查时态。主句谓语动词用了realized过去式，and并列连词前边也用了动词were，可知后边也应该用一般过去式，故将make改为made。

10.create后加an考查冠词。创造一个令人愉快的环境create an enjoyable environment，enjoyable是以元音读音开始的，所以前边用不定冠词an，故在create后加an。