题目内容
【题目】某英语报社向中学生征文,请你以“我理想的职业”为标题,根据下列要点完成短文。
1、职业特点;
2、选择的理由;
3、目前做何准备。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章标题已给出。
【答案】
One possible version:
My ideal job
I often imagine what I will be in the future. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer because I like designing the computer program and I will make enough time. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’will do a good job in whatever I do.
I also hope that I won’t be very busy so that I can spare time to company with my families. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games.
For my future ideal job, I am making every effort to make it. No matter how hard it is, I will go on trying hard and never never give it up.
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文,主题是“我理想的工作”。在写作时要注意从工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容。
本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来工作的畅想,然后从工作、生活两个方面描述了自己未来工作。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time, such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。