Question

【题目】短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sally，

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry to my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】of which改为in which

【2】like改为as

【3】tired改为tiring

【4】have earned改为had earned

【5】去掉support 后的for

【6】ask改为asking

【7】worry 后的to 改为with

【8】worse改为more

【9】something 后加that

【10】in the word改为in a word

【解析】试题分析：作者在本文中叙述了自己暑假做兼职工作导游的事，并阐述了这份工作对自己的影响。

【1】of which改为in which 考查介词。本题定语从句的先行词是vacation，在假期中使用介词in the vacation，所以在which前面加介词in，而不是of。

【2】like改为as 考查介词。介词as作为；构成动词短语work as...充当...；句意：在假期中我做了旅行社的导游。

【3】tired改为tiring 考查形容词。现在分词转换的形容词通常修饰事物，过去分词转换的形容词通常修饰人或与人有关的事物。形容词tiring令人疲倦的；句意：这份工作很有趣但是很累人。

【4】have earned改为had earned 考查时态。句式It was the first/second time that sb had done sth这是某人第几次做某事的时候了。如果前面的was，后面就要使用过去完成时，如果前面是is，后面要使用现在完成时。

【5】去掉support 后的for 考查动词support支持，养活；这是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要介词。所以本句中的for是多余的。

【6】ask改为asking 考查固定短语短语keep on doing sth一直做某事；句意：我过去一直想父母亲要钱，但是现在我再也不会浪费钱了，学会分担父母亲的担忧。

【7】worry 后的to 改为with 考查固定短语。短语share sth with sb与某人分享某事；本句表示和父母亲分担忧愁。

【8】worse改为more 考查固定句式。句式what's worse更糟糕的是；通常表示的是反面的事情；而what's more而且，通常表示的是积极的事情。根据文章内容可知在讲述做兼职对我的积极的影响，所以使用what's more。

【9】something 后加that 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是something，关系代词that指代先行词在句中充当主语。句意：我学会了一些从书本中学不到的东西。

【10】in the word改为in a word 考查固定短语。短语in a word一句话，总之；句意：总之，我度过了一个精彩而又有价值的暑假。