Question

20．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack今年要到中国学习一年，他想了解一些情况．请你根据下列提示给他写一封电子邮件：
    1．学习汉语和中国文化，该选择哪个城市？
    2．是住在学校里好，还是找一家host family？
    3．你是否能在空闲时陪他游览当地名胜古迹？
注意：1．词数：100左右；
      2．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to hear that you'11 come to China this year．______________________________
________________________________
    Yours，
    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Beijing is certainly one of the most famous cities in the world and the school which you are to attend is also well known．毫无疑问，北京是世界上最有名的城市之一而且你要去上的那所学校也是很有名的．
高分句型二：
 After you come to Beijing，you will live with a host family，which is a good to help you learn more about the local customs and the Chinese people's way of life．你来到北京之后，你会和一家当地人一起居住，那样的话会有助于你学习到更多当地的习俗以及北京人的生活方式．
句型一 which you are to attend is also well known．该句是一个由which充当关系代词，且在句中充当宾语的定语从句
句型二①After you come to Beijing 该句是一个after引导的时间状语从句
          ②which is a good to help you learn more about the local customs…该句为which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句中替代前面提到的整个主句的内容

解答 Dear Jack：
     I'm very glad to know that you will get a chance to study in China this year．I'd like to tell you something about Beijing so that you can have some ideas about it before you come．
    Beijing is certainly one of the most famous cities in the world and the school which you are to attend is also well known．（高分句型一）I am sure that you will improve your Chinese quickly here by communicating with teachers and students here．
      After you come to Beijing，you will live with a host family，which is a good to help you learn more about the local customs and the Chinese people's way of life．（高分句型二）During your spare time，you can go to visit the places of interest in Beijing，such as Tian An Men，The Forbidden City and The Great Wall．
   Of course，there are some disadvantages living in Beijing，for example，traveling can be difficult，particularly by car．Despite these things，I am sure you will have a good time staying and studying in Beijing．
    Looking forward to your coming．
     Yours'
     Li Hua．

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，写作时注意应将所列举的要求逐一表述完整，语言准确、简洁．