题目内容
14．假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中至多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It's reported that there have eighty million disabled people in our country．If our government has done a lot for them，it's not enough．
As student，what should we do for the disabled？To begin with，we should respect them and treat them good．We shouldn't look down them or ignore their value to the society．Additionally，we should care or them and try our best to help them，make their life easier．Lastly，it's necessary for us to help develop our confidence，which is the first step to succeed．
In conclusion，if everyone odes his or her best，the disabled are sure to live a happy life but they will make a great contribution．
分析 本文讨论的是残疾人的问题．
据报道我国有八百万残疾人，作为一名学生，首先我们应该尊重残疾人，关爱他们，帮助他们，让他们有信心，这是他们成功的第一步．如果每个人都去帮助他们．他们肯定会生活的快乐，并且为社会做出巨大的贡献．
解答 It's reported that there have eighty million disabled people in our country．If our government has done a lot for them，it's not enough．
As student，what should we do for the disabled？To begin with，we should respect them and treat them good．We shouldn't look down∧them or ignore their value to the society．Additionally，we should care or them and try our best to help them，make their life easier．Lastly，it's necessary for us to help develop our confidence，which is the first step to succeed．
In conclusion，if everyone odes his or her best，the disabled are sure to live a happy life but they will make a great contribution．
解析：
1．have改为are．考查have和there be句型混淆．have表示"某人拥有某物"；而本句有there，表示"某地存在某物"，所以用there be．2．If改为Though或Although．考查上下文逻辑错误．our government has done a lot for them表示"我们的政府已经坐了很多"，it's not enough表示这还不够，所以两句之间是让步关系，所以If改为Though或Although．
3．student改为students．考查单复数错误．student是可数名词，和后句we呼应，所以本句用复数students．
4．good改为well．考查副词修饰动词．修饰动词短语treat them 用副词well．
5． look down 后加upon或on．考查固定短语．表示"瞧不起某人"用look down 后加upon或on sb．
6．去掉the．考查冠词．society是专有名词，前不用冠词．
7．make改为making．考查非谓语动词．make their life easier做结果状语，是必然的结果，所以用现在分词making．
8．our改为their．考查代词一致．代指残疾人的信心用their confidence．
9．succeed改为success．考查派生词．此处to为介词后面跟名词success．
10．but改为and．考查连词．they will make a great contribution．表示"他们会做出巨大的贡献"，所以它和上句不是转折关系而是承接，所以用and．
点评 考查短文改错．
答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．
