题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr. Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help.
I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I'm not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I would be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and the resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于应用文写作,话题已给出,写作可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时注意语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
【题目】In a society such as the United states or Canada, which has many national, religious, and cultural differences, people highly value individualism—the differences among people. Teachers place a lot of importance on the qualities that make each student special. The educational systems in these countries show these values. Students do not memorize information. Instead, they work individually and find answers themselves. There is often discussion in the classroom. At an early age, students learn to form their own ideas and opinions.
In most Asian societies, by contrast, the people have the same language, history, and culture. Perhaps for this reason, the educational system in much of the Orient reflects society’s belief in group goals and purposed rather than individualism. Children in China, Japan, and Korea often work together and help one another on assignments. In the classroom, the teaching methods are often very formal. The teacher lectures, and the students listen. There is not much discussion. Instead, the students recite rules or information that they have memorized.
There are advantages and disadvantages to both of these systems of education. For example, one advantage to the system in Japan is that students there learn much more math and science than American students learn by the end of high school. They also study more hours each day and more days each year than North Americans do. The system is difficult, but it prepares students for a society that values discipline and self-control. There is, however, a disadvantage. Memorization is an important learning method in Japanese schools, yet many students say that after an exam, they forget much of the information that they have memorized.
The advantage of the educational system in North American, on the other hand, is that students learn to think for themselves. The system prepares them for a society that values creative ideas. There is , however, a disadvantage. When students graduate from high school, they haven’t memorized as many basic rules and facts as students in other countries have..
Students in the US and 【1】 | Students in China, Japan and Korean | |
What do they value? | 【2】 | 【3】 goals and purposes |
Ways of study | working individually | listen to the teachers |
forming their own ideas and opinions | memorizing and 【4】 | |
a lot of discussion in the classroom | not much discussion | |
【5】 | Learning to think for themselves | learning much more math and 【6】 by the end of high 【7】 |
studying more hours each day and more days each year | ||
good for a society that values 【8】 ideas. | good for a society valuing 【9】 and self-control | |
disadvantages | students haven’t memorized many basic rules and facts when before 【10】 | Information is forgotten easily |